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Azamat
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Posted 26-09-03 - 04:53 AM // Updated 26-09-03 - 04:56 AM
Blackmore's Night:
Castles and Dreams
Solitare with a Song in her Heart
but what a sad song to sing
turned her back on all that she knew
In the hope of a golden Ring...
And the Rains come down
And the Stars fell from the Sky
Oh, how dark the Night...
It always seems those Castles and Dreams
Fade with the morning light
such a sad story
that time loves to tell
copper coins shine for the Sun
from the floor after wishing well
So the Jewel of jeopardy
shines with each dangerous step
So unsure of what we've become
What we have and what we have left..
Ìîé ïåðåâîä:
Çàìêè è ìå÷òû
Îäèíîêàÿ ñ ïåñíåé â ñåðäöå
Íî ÷òî òà ïåñíü, ëèøü ãðóñòü îäíà
È âñå, ÷òî çíàëà, åå äóøà ñêàçàëà
 íàäåæäå íà âëàñòü çîëîòîãî êîëüöà
Ïðîøëè äîæäè
Ñ íåáåñ îñûïàëèñü âñå çâåçäû
Î, êàê æå íî÷ü òåìíà
È êàæåòñÿ ìíå, ÷òî çàìêè è ìå÷òû
Áåññëåäíî èñ÷åçàþò â òóìàíå ïðåäðàññâåòíîé òèøèíû
Òàêàÿ èñòîðèÿ ãðóñòè ïîëíà
È âðåìÿ ìíå òðåâîæèò ðàíû
Áëåñòÿò íà ñîëíöå ìåäíûå ìîíåòû, ëåæà íà ïîëó
Ïîñëå æåëàííîãî áðîñêà
Êàê òî ðóáèí, òàÿùèé ñìåðòü â ñåáå
Ãîðèò âñå ÿð÷å, ÷åì áëèæå ê öåëè òû
È ìîé òåáå ñîâåò - çàáóäü âñå òî, ÷òî áûëî ìåæäó íàìè
Çäåñü åñòü ëèøü òî, ÷òî ìû èìååì è ÷òî óòðàòèëè âäâîåì...
×òî ñêàæåòå íà ýòî?
[_] â ïîíåäåëüíèê îáúÿñíþ ïðåäíàçíà÷åíèå ýòîãî çíàêà. |
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Lena
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Posted 26-09-03 - 10:54 AM
N-da, i sposob rifmovki sohranen takoj zhe, kak v originale... Miloje delo!
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Arven
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Posted 27-09-03 - 06:10 PM
Êðàñèâûé è ãðóñòíûé òåêñò ïåñíè.
À âîîáùå ñêàæó íà ýòî: êîãäà åñòü çàìêè è ìå÷òû, òî íèêóäà îíè íå èñ÷åçíóò, åñëè âû ñàìè èì íå ïîçâîëèòå ;) |
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Azamat
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Posted 29-09-03 - 03:35 AM
Ñïàñèáî çà îòçûâû. Íàä ýòèì ïåðåâîäîì ÿ ðàáîòàë íåñêîëüêî ðàç. Ïûòàëñÿ ñîõðàíèòü ðàâíîâåñèå è ÷èòàáåëüíîñòü ïîñëå ïåðåâîäà.
à çíàê [_] òðàíñôîðìèðóåòñÿ â [+2]. Ýòî êàê áû ñ÷åò÷èê ãîëîñîâ, à íå îöåíêè çà ïåðåâîä :)
Åñëè áû ïåðåâîä ðàñêðèòèêîâàëè, òî áûòü áû ìèíóñó â êâàäðàòíûõ ñêîáêàõ. |
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Posted 30-09-03 - 08:37 AM
N-da... A moi perevodi bolshe nikto ne kritikujet, vse uzhe ponjali, chto ya pishu genialno :)))
Azamat, ti bi poproboval perevesti WHEN RELIGION COMES TO TOWN, a to ya ne mogu otdelatsja ot oschuschenija, chto eto - pesnja pro narkotiki... i moj sobstvennij variant perevoda mne ne nravitsja!
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Arven
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Posted 30-09-03 - 11:33 AM
Ëè÷íî ìíå íåïîíÿòíî, îòêóäà òàì âîîáùå ìîãóò âçÿòüñÿ îùóùóíèÿ ïðî íàðêîòèêè????? :@ |
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Posted 30-09-03 - 11:35 AM
To Arven:
A ti tak uverena v svojem glubokom znanii anglojazichnogo zhargona narkomanov??? 8-)
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Phoenix
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Posted 07-10-03 - 03:36 PM
Mozhet bit ona i ne yverena, no ya v Amerike dostatochno zhivy i mogy yvereno tebe skazat chto v etoi pesne rech idet sovsem ne o narkotikax. |
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Flasher T
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Posted 07-10-03 - 05:30 PM
Óõ òû! Ñìîòðèòå êòî îïðàâäàë ñâîé íèê :) |
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Posted 08-10-03 - 12:48 AM
Êàê ÿ åñòü ÷åëîâåê íå øèáêî ãðàìîòíûé, òî èçâèíèòå, êîëè ÷òî íå òàê… íî, âîîáùå-òî, Ìàðòûíêà ïèøåò ñâîè ñòèøêè ïî-øâåäñêè, è òîëüêî ñòàðàíèÿìè Ìóäà îíè ïðåâðàùàþòñÿ â ìóäîâûå àíãëèéñêèå âèðøè. Îáùåèçâåñòíî, ÷òî ñëîâî «God» îçíà÷àåò «êîêàèí», à âûðàæåíèå «Áîã åñòü!» – íå áîëåå ÷åì ðåêëàìà ñîîòâåòñòâóþùåãî òîâàðà… íà âñåõ ÿçûêàõ ìèðà, êîòîðûå ìíå õîòü â ýòèõ ïðåäåëàõ èçâåñòíû. Íå ëîãè÷íî ëè ïðåäïîëîæèòü, ÷òî Ìóä, íå æåëàÿ ñâÿçûâàòüñÿ ñ áëþñòèòåëÿìè íðàâñòâåííîñòè â âàøåì ëèöå, çàìåíèë ñîâî «áîã» (à ÷òî òàì áûëî â îðèãèíàëå ìû íå çíàåì) íà ñëîâî «ðåëèãèÿ»? Òîò æå ñëó÷àé – â íà÷àëå ïåðâîãî êóïëåòà WE GOTTA GO… Íó-êà, êàêèå àññîöèàöèè ó âàñ âûçûâàåò ýòî ñòðî÷êà? Give me SOMETHING, I can’t stait waiting? Ïî-àíãëèéñêè íàïèñàíî “÷òî-òî”, à êàêîå ñëîâî áûëî íàïèñàíî â îðèãèíàëå ïî-øâåäñêè ìû ìîæåì òîëüêî äîãàäûâàòüñÿ… Íó è, åñëè óæ íà òî ïîøëî, êàêèå àññîöèàöèè ó âàñ âûçûâàåò LONELINESS – RING THE ALARM?
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Posted 08-10-03 - 01:07 PM
... ïîìíèòñÿ, è Ýìèíåì çàìåíèë PURPLE PILLS íà PURPLE HILLS, òàê ÷òî áëþñòèòåëè íðàâñòâåííîñòè ìîãóò ñïàòü ñïîêîéíî. Íèãäå, êðîìå Ðîññèè, íèêòî íå ïèøåò ïåñåí, â êîòîðûõ óïîìèíàëèñü áû íàðêîòèêè. Ýòî òîëüêî ÌÎÍÃÎË ØÓÓÄÀÍ ïîåò âñÿêóþ ãàäîñòü, òèïà:
Ìû ñ ïðèÿòåëåì íà ïàðó
çàáèâàëè êîñÿêè...
Íåóæåëè íàñ ïîñàäÿò
çà òàêèå ïóñòÿêè?
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Rainbow
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Posted 08-10-03 - 05:52 PM
Êòî-íèáóäü, óãîâîðèòå å¸ ïåðåñòàòü èçâðàùàòü õîðîøèå ïåñíè! Î÷åíü ïðîøó! Ìåíÿ ñåé÷àñ ñòîøíèò... |
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Flasher T
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Posted 08-10-03 - 08:16 PM
Âîò óæ äåéñòâèòåëüíî - êòî î ÷åì, à âøèâûé î áàíå. ×åãî-òî ÿ çà âñå ãîäû èçó÷åíèÿ àíãëèéñêîãî â øêîëå è óíèâåðå, à òàêæå òåñíîãî îáùåíèÿ ñ àìåðèêàíñêîé (îòíþäü íå "çîëîòîé") ìîëîäåæüþ òàê è íå ñïîäîáèëñÿ âûó÷èòü òåðìèíîëîãèþ íàðêîìàíîâ. Íàâåðíîå, äëÿ ýòîãî íàäî â ýòîì êðóãå ïîñòîÿííî êðóòèòüñÿ... |
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Arven
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Posted 08-10-03 - 09:24 PM
...èëè ïîïðîñòó âîñïðèíèìàòü òâîð÷åñòâî Ìàðòèíà àáñîëþòíî â èíîì, íåïîíÿòíîì è íåïðèåìëåìîì äëÿ âñåõ íàñ ñâåòå. |
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Arven
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Posted 08-10-03 - 09:25 PM
Äà è äëÿ íåãî ñàìîãî, óâåðåíà, òîæå :))) |
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Posted 09-10-03 - 08:12 AM
Flasher, òû æå ëèíãâèñò! Êàê æå òû íå âûó÷èë òåðìèíîëîãèþ íàðêîìàíîâ??? Áåçîáðàçèå êàêîå!
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